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Which do you prefer: A house or a flat?

Which do you prefer: A house or a flat? LbXX8
When you need a new house, you ask yourself if you prefer a house or a flat. I had it clear. Let´s see the advantages of both of them. On the one hand, when you live in a flat, you have to share some places with your neighbours, as the staircase or the lift, what is a share cost. Besides, it's possible to have a very noissy neighbour what can be very stressful daily, specially if that disturb you when you sleepr or study. In the other hand, you can live in a house. A house can be more expensive to buy and maybe you can need more security to live safe, but you are more independent there. Every metre of the house´s area is your and you can build your own house like you want. Personally, I live in a flat during the week and in a house on weekends and holidays, so I have some experience living in both of them, and I absolutly prefer living in a house. There is really where I am at home.
When you need a new
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house
, you ask yourself if you prefer a
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house
or a flat. I had it
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clear
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the advantages of both of them.

On the one hand, when you
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live
in a flat, you
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have to
share
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some
places with your
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neighbours
, as the staircase or the lift, what is a share cost.
Besides
, it's possible to have a
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very
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noissy
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neighbour
what can be
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very
stressful daily,
specially
if that disturb you when you
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sleepr
or study.

In the other hand, you can
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live
in a
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house
. A
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house
can be more expensive to
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buy
and maybe you can need more security to
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live
safe,
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but
you are more independent there. Every
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metre
of the
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house´s
area is your and you can build your
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own
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house
like you want.

Personally
, I
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live
in a flat during the week and in a
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house
on weekends and holidays,
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so
I have
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some
experience living in both of them, and I
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absolutly
prefer living in a
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. There is
really
where I am at home.
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IELTS essay Which do you prefer: A house or a flat?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
179 words
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