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In past there were no computers now we have computers describe positive and negative effect of in our routine life by giving eq

In past there were no computers now we have computers describe positive and negative effect of in our routine life by giving eq nXlqe
In past recent time due to drastic development in the field of science and techanology. now, improvement in technology compair the past few decade. past in techanology not avilable in world but indays are very popular technology all around the worlds. hence, both negative and positive effect are articulated trail paragraphs. Fristly discuss about positive effects. todays, world in computer are very usefull in people life and people life very hectic scedual in office work and jobs. For exapmle, computer useage in office work and jobs work easly short timr in finish works. Last but not least computers are connectly induvidual and creat globaly privellage. Secondly, citizen work are very easy depend on computer but computer heavy useages in negatively impact in life. computer displays rays directly passout in eyes and harmfull of multi diseases like headack problems, loosing power memory and change in behaviours. So, the many of citizens limitation on computer useage in people life. In conclusion, I conlued that computers are very use full in humans life but people have rstriction on useage of computers becuse negative side effects on group of people.
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techanology
.
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now
, improvement in technology
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compair
the past
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few decade
.
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past
in
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techanology
not
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avilable
in world
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but
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indays
are
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very
popular technology all around the worlds.
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hence
, both
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negative
and
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positive
effect
are articulated
trail paragraphs.
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Fristly
discuss about
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positive
effects.
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todays
, world in computer are
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very
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usefull
in
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people
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life
and
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people
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life
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very
hectic
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scedual
in office
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work
and jobs. For
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exapmle
, computer
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useage
in office
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work
and jobs
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work
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easly
short
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timr
in finish works. Last
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but
not
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least
computers are
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connectly
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induvidual
and
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creat
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globaly
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privellage
.
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, citizen
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work
are
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very
easy depend on computer
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but
computer heavy
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useages
in
negatively
impact in
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life
.
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computer
displays rays
directly
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passout
in eyes and
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harmfull
of multi diseases like
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headack
problems, loosing power memory and
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change
in
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behaviours
.
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, the
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many
of citizens limitation on computer
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useage
in
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people
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life
.
In conclusion
, I
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conlued
that computers are
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very
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use
full in humans
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life
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but
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people
have
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rstriction
on
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useage
of computers
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becuse
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negative
side effects on group of
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people
.

IELTS essay In past there were no computers now we have computers describe positive and negative effect of in our routine life by giving eq

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
186 words
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