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Which car will you prefer large or small

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Recently the phenomenon of selling cars in the automobile industry and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many presence of different varieties ranging from low budget to premium cars is highly beneficial, such issues is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that market should be flexible to offer cars in all ranges though with some pros and cons on each model and I will analyze that throughout this essay. From a social standpoint, the modern life can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that both crucial issues and final outcomes are inextricably bound up. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic survey on the car segments which discovered the purchase power of the customer from middle to higher class. Each of them chose the car which fits to their budget. Thus, the beneficial ramifications of the market presence of cars of all types targetting their intended customers apparently can be seen. Within the realm of public arena, the luxurious car might increase the consequneces of critical needs. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted the downside of getting attracted to luxury cars though they are out of budget, and easily giving anegative impact in society. To conclude, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that an individual must understand the need and buy the car which fits his budget. The market does offer different segments based on the features of the car but its always advantageous to go for a budget car. Not only the advantages of the buying habit of customer proves significance of the this unique phenomenon bbut also pinpoints thorny issues' potential implications.
Recently the phenomenon of selling
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cars
in the automobile industry and its corresponding impacts have sparked a heated debate. Although contested by
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different
varieties ranging from low
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budget
to premium
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cars
is
highly
beneficial, such issues
is regarded
thoroughly
both constructive and
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positive
by a substantial number of individuals. I
am inclined
to believe that market should be flexible to offer
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cars
in all ranges though with
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some
pros and cons on each model and I will analyze that throughout this essay.

From a social standpoint, the modern life can provide the society with
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some
noticeable effects which
are rooted
in the fact that both crucial issues and final outcomes are
inextricably
bound up. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic survey on the
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car
segments which discovered the
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purchase
power of the customer from middle to higher
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class
. Each of them chose the
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car
which fits to their
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budget
.
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, the beneficial ramifications of the market presence of
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cars
of all types
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targetting
their intended customers
apparently
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.

Within the realm of public arena, the luxurious
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car
might increase the
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consequneces
of critical needs. As a tangible example,
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some
scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted the downside of getting attracted to luxury
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cars
though they are out of
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budget
, and
easily
giving
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anegative
impact in society.

To conclude
, while there are compelling arguments on both sides, I
profoundly
believe that an individual
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must
understand the need and
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buy
the
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car
which fits his
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budget
. The market does offer
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different
segments based on the features of the
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car
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but
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always advantageous to go for a
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budget
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car
. Not
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only
the advantages of the buying habit of customer proves significance of
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the this
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also
pinpoints thorny issues' potential implications.
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IELTS essay Which car will you prefer large or small

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
307 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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