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The passage casts doubts about a painting of woman with white coat by the famous seventeenth- century painter Rembrandt.

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The passage casts doubts about a painting of woman with white coat by the famous seventeenth- century painter Rembrandt. While the speaker provides a true examination of that painting by some reserachers, which reveals that the paining was actually by Rembrandt. First the passage talks about the inconsistent fur color coat of that women represented into the paining. The coat is very bright in color and rich compared to the linen cap which looks like a servant's cap. While speaker says that according to the recent examination fur color was enhanced after 100 years of the original painting to increase it's value. Secondly, according to the passage, the face of the women in that paining was under the shadow of the light reflected from below. The speaker provides accurate reason of this light and shadow discrepancy. he says that there was no reflection in the original portrait of the women with simple colored cloth. But it occurred after enhancing the color of fur coat claimed by the researchers. Third, the passage indicates that the painting was painted on a panel made of several pieces of wood glue together. On the other hand, the speaker refutes it by providing evidence which suggests that single wood was used for the original paining; however it was later glued with wood panel to make the paining grand and expensive. And, It has been also studied that the wood used in the original paining was from the same tree as the other paining done by Rembrandt.
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casts doubts about a
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painting
of woman with white
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coat
by the
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famous
seventeenth- century painter Rembrandt. While the speaker provides a true examination of that
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painting
by
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some
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reserachers
, which reveals that the
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paining
was actually by Rembrandt.

First
the
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passage
talks about the inconsistent fur
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color
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coat
of that women represented into the
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paining
. The
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coat
is
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very
bright in
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color
and rich compared to the linen cap which looks like a servant's cap. While speaker says that according to the recent examination fur
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color
was enhanced
after 100 years of the
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original
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painting
Did you mean "to increase its value"?
to increase it's value
.

Secondly
, according to the
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passage
, the face of the women in that
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paining
was under the shadow of the light reflected from below. The speaker provides accurate reason of this light and shadow discrepancy.
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he
says that there was no reflection in the
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original
portrait of the women with simple colored cloth.
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But
it occurred after enhancing the
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color
of fur
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coat
claimed by the researchers.

Third, the
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passage
indicates that the
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painting
was painted
on a panel made of several pieces of
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wood
glue together.
On the other hand
, the speaker refutes it by providing evidence which suggests that single
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wood
was
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used
for the
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original
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paining
;
however
it was later glued with
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wood
panel to
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make
the
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paining
grand and expensive. And, It has been
also
studied that the
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wood
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used
in the
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original
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paining
was from the same tree as the other
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paining
done by Rembrandt.
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IELTS essay The passage casts doubts about a painting of woman with white coat by the famous seventeenth- century painter Rembrandt.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
251 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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