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Whether students should spent on living in another country is a matter of controversy. Some people believe that contact

Whether students should spent on living in another country is a matter of controversy. Some people believe that contact 73Xkn

Whether students should spent on living in another country is a matter of controversy. Some people believe that contact with a new culture in order to develop myself. While others claim that this can wreaks havoc on to local culture. I partly agree the statement on the following grounds. The ideal of living in another countries proves appealing to youngsters. They are feel happy and comfortable when contacting with new culture which they used to have conquer dream it. However, because it is different about lifestyle, language and customs make for them feel shock, confused initial after impacting it.

“Whether” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Whether
 students should The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "spend"spend
spent
 on living in another country is a matter of controversy. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
Some
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 believe that contact with a new culture in order to develop myself. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
 others claim that this can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "wreak"wreak
wreaks
 havoc on to local culture. I partly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesce
agree
 the statement on the following grounds.

The ideal of living in another countries proves appealing to youngsters. They are feel happy and comfortable when contacting with new culture which they This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to have Use past participle here: "conquered".conquered
conquer
 dream it. However
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 about lifestyle, language and customs This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 for them feel shock, confused initial after impacting it. 