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When‌ ‌you‌ ‌learn‌ ‌a‌ ‌foreign‌ ‌language, ‌ ‌all‌ ‌four‌ ‌skills‌ ‌ (listening, ‌ ‌reading, ‌ ‌speaking, ‌ ‌and‌ ‌writing) ‌ ‌are‌ ‌ equally‌ ‌important.‌ ‌To‌ ‌what‌ ‌extent‌ ‌do‌ ‌you‌ ‌agree‌ ‌or‌ ‌disagree? ‌ ‌

When‌ ‌you‌ ‌learn‌ ‌a‌ ‌foreign‌ ‌language, ‌ ‌all‌ ‌four‌ ‌skills‌ ‌ (listening, ‌ ‌reading, ‌ ‌speaking, ‌ ‌and‌ ‌writing) ‌ ‌are‌ ‌ equally‌ ‌important. ‌ ‌To‌ ‌what‌ ‌extent‌ ‌do‌ ‌you‌ ‌agree‌ ‌or‌ ‌disagree? ‌ ‌ oWGX
Nowadays learning about foreign languages is new trend in the society. There are four types of studying methods in language learning, such as writing, listening, speaking and reading. When considering about the learning of foreign language, I believe that all the areas are equally important to improve the basic knowledge about foreign languages. Improving languages skills helps to communicate with different countries without any tension, because most of the people travel many foreign countries to complete their tasks in their daily lives. Such as for higher education purposes, for work purposes and etc. Therefore, all the people can freely use at least one method for learning another language which is based on the foreign country. In that case writing and speaking plays a major role in the communication which is based on foreigners and locals. Actually it is help to make better relationship between two or more country in the modern society. Not only that but also, this is better opportunity to understand about foreign cultures in the world. For example People can use social media option to communicate with another people in foreign culture. Such as texting, calling, and etc. But if someone fail to understand foreign language correctly, they will lose their connection defiantly. Therefore, every people should pay attention all the areas in language learning. In addition to these, learning different country languages are directly helped to improve performance in other academic areas in daily lives. For example reading foreign languages based articles helps improve vocabulary of the students. Actually this will increase the memory capacity of the learners. Therefore, they can easily reach their international academic goals in their dream with the self –confidence. In that case, listening and reading are most important areas in language learning. In conclusion, learning four skills of foreign languages have numerous academic and cultural advantages in daily lives. Therefore, when try to learning the foreign based language we should pay attention to all four skills equally. Because it will be better way to understand the language without any negative outcomes.
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IELTS essay When‌ ‌you‌ ‌learn‌ ‌a‌ ‌foreign‌ ‌language, ‌ ‌all‌ ‌four‌ ‌skills‌ ‌ (listening, ‌ ‌reading, ‌ ‌speaking, ‌ ‌and‌ ‌writing) ‌ ‌are‌ ‌ equally‌ ‌important. ‌ ‌To‌ ‌what‌ ‌extent‌ ‌do‌ ‌you‌ ‌agree‌ ‌or‌ ‌disagree? ‌ ‌

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4 paragraphs
340 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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