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When we enter a classroom with a native teacher, we can mimic the teacher's intonation as well as his English pronunciation. This helps us to learn better and faster. It may be possible to correct common errors in English pronunciation and usage. It is possible to learn more about culture as well as society. Study culture to get a sense of that country, you can learn English faster

When we enter a classroom with a native teacher, we can mimic the teacher's intonation as well as his English pronunciation. This helps us to learn better and faster. It may be possible to correct common errors in English pronunciation and usage. It is possible to learn more about culture as well as society. Study culture to get a sense of that country, you can learn English faster ArRQ1
When we enter a classroom with a native teacher, we can mimic the teacher's intonation as well as his English pronunciation. This helps us to learn better and faster. It may be possible to correct common errors in English pronunciation and usage. It is possible to learn more about culture as well as society. Study culture to get a sense of that country, you can learn English faster. Firstly, if we join in an English club, we can have a great opportunity to exchange with many people who good at English. So we will study better Secondly, taking part in the English club is also good way to learn a lot of skills such as listening, speaking, reading, and writing skills. As a result, we will get a promotion in studying Thirdly, it'll make us more confidently because we are worked in an eventful environment. Finally, after having studied stressfully at school we can participate in the English club to relax, entertain and refesh When communicating in English clubs, the better learners will help you correct mistakes in speaking process or incorrect usage of words, so you can learn from experience. Moreover, it promotes confidence in us when communicating in English, eliminating the embarrassment we once had
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as his English pronunciation. This
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better and faster. It may be possible to correct common errors in English pronunciation and usage. It is possible to
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learn
more about culture
as well
as society. Study culture to
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learn
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skills
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stressfully
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club
to relax, entertain and
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refesh


When communicating in English
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, the better learners will
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help
you correct mistakes in speaking process or incorrect usage of words,
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so
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learn
from experience.
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, it promotes confidence in us when communicating in English, eliminating the embarrassment we once had
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IELTS essay When we enter a classroom with a native teacher, we can mimic the teacher's intonation as well as his English pronunciation. This helps us to learn better and faster. It may be possible to correct common errors in English pronunciation and usage. It is possible to learn more about culture as well as society. Study culture to get a sense of that country, you can learn English faster

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
206 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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