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“When People ask me how i'm doing” by rudy francisco

“When People ask me how i'm doing” by rudy francisco 3LQ2d
When people ask me how i'm doing Is a great representation of depression the poem really makes you think how Everybody has demons no matter how good their life is the book that its Is called helium and it's a great book and you should get it back to the Poem the metaphors in this its incredible and how they used pumpkin Like carving the face that people want to see it's truly remarkable the message In how everyone says there doing alright its amazing its hard in life sometimes but you get through it no matter what and that is why people love this book and specifically this poem another reason to love it how It follows you around and you never forget its idea about sadness
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IELTS essay “When People ask me how i'm doing” by rudy francisco

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
127 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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