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When I was in grade 10, I realized that how important English is in modern society so I started learning English at my best

When I was in grade 10, I realized that how important English is in modern society so I started learning English at my best gbRPd
When I was in grade 10, I realized that how important English is in modern society so I started learning English at my best. On the way to master English, I’ve encountered a lot of obstacles. One of the things that I find it difficult to learn is Vocabulary. It plays a vital role in our English skill so I try my best to learn as much vocabulary as possible. At first, I found it hard to remember all the words that I had learned so I tried to revise them on a daily basis. And now my vocabulary has improved considerably. From my perspective, the best way to learn vocab is review regularly. In a nutshell, learning vocab is an essential part of learning English. When you have a certain range of words, you can communicate effectively. #ISPELL2021
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learning English at my best. On the way to master English, I’ve encountered
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to remember all the words that I had learned
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I tried to revise them on a daily basis. And
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my vocabulary has
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. From my perspective, the best way to learn vocab is review
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. In a nutshell, learning vocab is an essential part of learning English. When you have a certain range of words, you can communicate
effectively
.

#ISPELL2021
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IELTS essay When I was in grade 10, I realized that how important English is in modern society so I started learning English at my best

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
138 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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