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Men and women are capable for doing equal jobs. What extent you agree or disagree?

Men and women are capable for doing equal jobs. What extent you agree or disagree? 1o79X
The importance of capability of both men and woman regard to doing job in every field equally which was always debatable has now become more controversial with people claiming that it is beneficial while others against this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy in recent years. In my opinion the former proportion appears to be more rational. The essay will further elaborate my view for favoring this trend and thus will leads to a logical conclusion. Analyzing the statement and explaining further, first and foremost reason of this trend is that due to the modernization both genders have much knowledge about every work. Another striking benefit of this trend is that discrimination between men and woman for doing each other's profession work is diminished. Categorically discussing, it cannot be ignored that the main reason of this trend is that although woman are usually weaker by strong body but they are contributing to enhance country's economy as same as men. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reason stems from that fact is that even though jobs like beauty related, hospital nurses are basically open for only girls while men also give their 100% for doing such type of jobs. Moving further, it is pertinent to mention that either it domestically or nationally men and woman both are making equal effort for nation. Apart from the reasons mentioned above It can be stated clearly that why plethora of individuals are in favor of this trend. To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that benefits of men and woman doing equal job are indeed too great to ignore.
The importance of capability of both
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men
and
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woman
regard to
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doing
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job
in every field
equally
which was always debatable has
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now
become more controversial with
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people
claiming that it is beneficial while others against this notion. The substantial influence of this
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trend
has sparked the controversy in recent years. In my opinion the former proportion appears to be more rational. The essay will
further
elaborate my view for favoring this
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trend
and
thus
will
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leads
to a logical conclusion.

Analyzing the statement and explaining
further
,
first
and foremost
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reason
of this
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trend
is that due to the modernization both genders have much knowledge about every work. Another striking benefit of this
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trend
is that discrimination between
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men
and
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woman
for
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doing
each other's profession work
is diminished
.
Categorically
discussing, it cannot be
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ignored
that the main
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reason
of this
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trend
is that although
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woman
are
usually
weaker by strong body
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but
they are contributing to enhance country's economy as same as
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men
.

Probing ahead, one of the main underlying
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reason
stems from that fact is that
even though
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jobs
like beauty related, hospital nurses are
basically
open for
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only
girls while
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men
also
give their 100% for
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doing
such type of
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jobs
. Moving
further
, it is pertinent to mention that either it
domestically
or
nationally
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men
and
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woman
both are making equal effort for nation. Apart from the
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reasons
mentioned above It can
be stated
clearly
that why plethora of individuals are in favor of this trend.

To recapitulate, according to the arguments aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that benefits of
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men
and
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woman
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doing
equal
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job
are
indeed
too great to
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ignore
.

IELTS essay Men and women are capable for doing equal jobs. What extent you agree or disagree?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
278 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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