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I am a dedicated and compassionate Registered nurse with career history in direct patient care, proven ability to remain calm under pressure and skilfully handle difficult patients and high-stress situations. Consistently developing strong relationships with patients and families through therapeutic communications and respectful attitude. As an international nurse, I have received NMC decision letter and have successfully passed the NMC CBT Exam and the four modules of IELTS. However, will require a Tier 2 sponsorship visa as I seek for an opportunity to work in the United Kingdom for better opportunities and where I can also bring remarkable contribution based on my skills and experienced. Having worked in the following specialist facilities: Obstetric and gynaecology, Trauma and Orthopedic unit, Medicine, Surgery, Accident and Emergency, Paediatric unit, Special care baby unit, Dialysis center, Intensive care unit, Ear Nose and throat (ENT) units, Opthalmology unit, Theatre and experienced a plethora of cases such as: Antenatal care, Management of labour, Spontaneous vaginal delivery, Disc prolapsed, Lumbar spondylosis, Commuted fracture, Bilateral Heart failure, Chronic kidney Diseases, Diabetic foot ulcer, Hydrocele, Benign Prostrate Hypertrophy, Gun shot injury, head injury, Marasmus, sever malaria, cerebral palsy, Convulsion, seizures, epilepsy, Hydrocephalus, Jaundice, preterm babies asphyxia, coma, Acute Respiratory distress, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease ( COPD), Glaucoma, Cataract, Exploratory laparotomy, Appendectomy, hysterectomy and orchiopexy to mention a few. I am now searching for an opportunity to work in the United Kingdom for better opportunities and where I can also bring remarkable contribution based on my skills and experience. I love new challenges and with my positive and proactive attitude towards work I will be ready to learn new skills and take on several new tasks. I am very much interested in working with the University Hospitals Birmingham NHS Foundation Trust because it values: collaborative, honest, accountable, innovative, respectful are important to me as they are in line with how I practice (give care) as a nurse. I understand the Trust is Keen about service delivery and the quality of healthcare given to clients, families and the community as a whole and it would be a great pleasure working as a team member or even a leader as I have been nominated to lead from college to university. I also have the ability to bring the best out of my colleagues as I am always delighted in them being part of the team. In addition, I am well grounded in drug calculations, Microsoft word, excel and have a vast knowledge in ICT. More so, i love to research more on a particular treatment regimen to ensure evidence based practice is used. The following are my skills: leadership, Adaptability, Flexibility, ability to work under pressure etc. In regards to the 6 c’s, I am able to exhibit this in rendering a holistic and personalized care to patients which is the core in putting patients in the center of their care. I am compassionate, caring, courageous, competent at rendering my nursing care, committed to impacting positivity and a good listener. I am certain that the above are just a subset of what I can offer and would be elated if i am granted an Interview. I anticipate receiving a favourable response and working with your Trust.
I am a dedicated and compassionate Registered nurse with career history in direct
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patient
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care
, proven ability to remain calm under pressure and
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skilfully
handle difficult
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patients
and high-
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stress
situations.
Consistently
developing strong relationships with
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patients
and families through therapeutic communications and respectful attitude.

As an international nurse, I have received
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NMC
decision letter and have
successfully
passed the
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NMC
CBT Exam and the four modules of IELTS.
However
, will require a Tier 2 sponsorship visa as I seek for an
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opportunity
to
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work
in the United Kingdom for better
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opportunities
and where I can
also
bring remarkable contribution based on my
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skills
and experienced.

Having worked in the following specialist facilities: Obstetric and
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gynaecology
, Trauma and Orthopedic
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unit
, Medicine, Surgery, Accident and Emergency,
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Paediatric
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unit
, Special
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care
baby
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unit
, Dialysis center, Intensive
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care
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unit
, Ear Nose and throat (
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ENT
)
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units
,
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Opthalmology
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unit
,
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Theatre
and experienced a plethora of cases such as: Antenatal
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care
, Management of
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labour
, Spontaneous vaginal delivery, Disc prolapsed, Lumbar spondylosis, Commuted fracture, Bilateral Heart failure, Chronic kidney Diseases, Diabetic foot ulcer,
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Hydrocele
, Benign Prostrate Hypertrophy, Gun shot injury, head injury,
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Marasmus
, sever malaria, cerebral palsy, Convulsion, seizures, epilepsy, Hydrocephalus, Jaundice, preterm babies asphyxia, coma, Acute Respiratory distress, chronic obstructive pulmonary disease
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(
COPD), Glaucoma, Cataract, Exploratory laparotomy, Appendectomy, hysterectomy and
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orchiopexy
to mention a few.

I am
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now
searching for an
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opportunity
to
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work
in the United Kingdom for better
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opportunities
and where I can
also
bring remarkable contribution based on my
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skills
and experience. I
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love
new challenges and with my
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positive
and proactive attitude towards
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work
I will be ready to learn new
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skills
and take on several new tasks.

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I
am
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very
much interested in working with the University Hospitals Birmingham NHS Foundation Trust
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because
it values: collaborative, honest, accountable, innovative, respectful are
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important
to me as they are in line with how I practice (give
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care)
as a nurse.

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I
understand the Trust is Keen about service delivery and the quality of healthcare
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given
to clients, families and the community as a whole and it would be a great pleasure working as a team member or even a leader as I have
been nominated
to lead from college to university.
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I
also
have the ability to bring the best out of my colleagues as I am always delighted in them being part of the team.

In addition
, I am well grounded in drug calculations,
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Microsoft word
, excel and have
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "vast knowledge".
a vast knowledge
in ICT. More
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so
,
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i
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love
to research more on a particular treatment regimen to ensure evidence based practice is
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used
.

The following are my
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skills
: leadership, Adaptability, Flexibility, ability to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
work
under pressure etc.

Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
In regards to
the 6 c’s, I am able to exhibit this in rendering a holistic and personalized
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care
to
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patients
which is the core in putting
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patients
in the center of their
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care
. I am compassionate, caring, courageous, competent at rendering my nursing
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care
, committed to impacting positivity and a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
listener.

I am certain that the above are
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just
a subset of what I can offer and would
be elated
if
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i
am granted
an Interview.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
anticipate receiving a
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favourable
response and working with your Trust.
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IELTS essay Nursing personal statement is very important for a job application.

Essay
  American English
10 paragraphs
534 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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