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When family meal together it is considered as a social activity would you agree that is the weather is important to the people of your Nation

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make
their bonding stronger with their children for paradigm, parents can give advices to their children about their career and
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tell
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them of moral values and
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their culture and tradition
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present their culture and moral values built
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positive
attitude among fever due to this
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them to increase their knowledge of a specific topic and 35
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with their parents due to which they do not feel alone and always be
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jubiliant
. To sum up, reiterating that group eating among
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family
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members
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help
to
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make
bond stronger and this aid to remove
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stress
of their daily life
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denizens should spend quality
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IELTS essay When family meal together it is considered as a social activity would you agree that is the weather is important to the people of your Nation

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
231 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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