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when did you hire at your current company?

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I was hired at this company 20 years ago. Hence, it's about 20 years that I have been working here. My friend has been fired recently. He is really disappointed, however, he should be encouraged to find a job in another company. He was booked for a job interview yesterday but it was canceled. A new brand office is being built in our company. Perhaps my friend could be employed in this new office. Plenty of people are recruited in our office every year.
I
was hired
at this
company
20 years ago.
Hence
, it's about 20 years that I have been working here. My friend has
been fired
recently. He is
really
disappointed,
however
, he should
be encouraged
to find a job in another
company
. He
was booked
for a job interview yesterday
but
it
was canceled
. A new brand office is
being built
in our
company
. Perhaps my friend could
be employed
in this new office.
Plenty
of
people
are recruited
in our office every year.
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IELTS essay when did you hire at your current company?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
84 words
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5.0
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