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When did you first learn to ride a bike?

When did you first learn to ride a bike? Ygqgr

I remember the first time I take up with riding when I was 6 years old. The first bicycle my parents bought me was had a blue colour and it 's was smaller than mine's now. It was just very fundamental bike, not to expensive or complicated. I was very glad and happy at that time and I got myself to ride it immediately, but soon after that, I get the bike bumped to the power pole and get hurt at foots. So after that day, I plucked up all of my will and determined to try it again. Then I find that the way to did it which not let my fall, that is leans the handle bar of the bike to the wall of my house. Flabbergasted, it was success more than I expected, I can rode two-wheels bike. I did it over and over again until I felt familiar, I didn't need a wall anymore then I could rode it in free style and correct with bike's underlying. But the consequences was terrible, a giants and inordinate scratch were made, luckily, my family didn't care about it

I remember the first
 time I take up with riding when I was 6 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
. The first
 bicycle my parents This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 me was had
 a blue Possible spelling mistake. 'colour' is British English.color
colour
 and it 's was smaller than mine's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 fundamental You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
bike
, not to expensive or complicated. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 glad and happy at that time and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 myself to ride it immediately, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 after that, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
bike
 bumped to the power pole and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 hurt at foots. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 after that day, I plucked up all of my will and determined to try it again. Then I find that the way to did it which not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 my fall, that is
 leans the handle bar of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
bike
 to the wall of my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
. Flabbergasted, it was success more than I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
, I can The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: "ride"ride
rode
 two-wheels You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpedal
bike
. I did it over and over again until I felt familiar, I didn't need a wall Make sure that 'anymore' is used as an adverb, not as an adjective. Did you mean "any more"?any more
anymore
 then I could The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: "ride"ride
rode
 it in free style and correct with bike's underlying. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the consequences was terrible, a giants and inordinate scratch were made
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