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It has been 2 years people encounter with one of the greatest diseases called corona virus and unfortunately it caused many deaths all of the world. What does it lead to and what can be done to lessen the effect of this disaster?

It has been 2 years people encounter with one of the greatest diseases called corona virus and unfortunately it caused many deaths all of the world. What does it lead to and what can be done to lessen the effect of this disaster? Ygqyr
People have been infected with one of the most perilous viruses named Covid19 which has caused numerous deaths around the world for the past 2 years. The effect of this fluxion is that education system amends its form which online lessons entered into teaching. The denouement which government apply is that individuals are vaccinated. Initially, one of the core effect of Corona virus is about digital system has been supplied at education. As we know, technology records are increasing in recent years and with the spread of the virus it raises its high-top places. Covid 19 has developed some platforms which myriad of individual are unaware of them such as Zoom, Microsoft Teams. Social applications like Instagram, Facebook, WhatsApp has lived their flowering times during Covid 19. Their joint stock has begun to rise day by day so social platforms has gained money despite dangerous virus. However, there are copious ways to diminish the effect of this catastrophe. One of them is to vaccinate which is done by government for saving its population. Even though it has some satisfactory effects, I think individuals substantially suffer from its bad effects. That is why vaccinating should apply all individuals in order to re-enter to our prior life. In conclusion, Covid 19 has radically change our life. Digital teaching system has affected everyone differently. For those who wants to relax at their home this system has been decent way whereas for those who has health problems, digitalized form has ruined their health and plans
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have
been infected
with one of the most perilous viruses named
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Covid19
which has caused numerous deaths around the world for the past 2 years. The
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effect
of this
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fluxion
is that education
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system
amends its form which online lessons entered into teaching. The
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denouement
which
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government
apply is that
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individuals
are vaccinated
.

Initially
, one of the core
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effect
of
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Corona virus
is about digital
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system
has
been supplied
at education. As we know, technology records are increasing in recent years and with the spread of the virus it raises its high-top places.
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Covid 19
has developed
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some
platforms which myriad of
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individual
are unaware of them such as Zoom, Microsoft Teams. Social applications like Instagram, Facebook, WhatsApp has
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lived
their flowering times during
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Covid 19
. Their joint stock has begun to rise day by day
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so
social platforms has gained money despite
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dangerous
virus.

However
, there are copious ways to diminish the
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effect
of this catastrophe. One of them is to vaccinate which
is done
by
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government
for saving its population.
Even though
it has
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some
satisfactory effects, I
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think
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individuals
substantially
suffer from its
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bad
effects.
That is
why vaccinating should apply all
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individuals
in order to re-enter to our prior life.

In conclusion
,
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Covid 19
has
radically
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change
our life. Digital teaching
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system
has
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affected
everyone
differently
. For those who wants to relax at their home this
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system
has been
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decent
way whereas for those who has health problems, digitalized form has ruined their health and
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IELTS essay It has been 2 years people encounter with one of the greatest diseases called corona virus and unfortunately it caused many deaths all of the world. What does it lead to and what can be done to lessen the effect of this disaster?

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  American English
4 paragraphs
250 words
6.0
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