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when children go to school

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when children go to school, they can improve their social interactions. when i was a child, I usually played in the street. After I went to school I learned a lot of things such as teamwork, defending my rights. Hello is it me you are looking for I can see in your eyes, I can see in your smiles Some people believe that education plays a major role in the lives of people. I strongly agree with that. Needless to say, when individuals learn a lot of new things in the school or college they can improve in different fields, and also they can serve the society more effectively. On the other hand, going to college may help them to find new qualities in themselves specially social interaction and the power of thinking. We all know that knowledge makes you stronger. However,
when
children go to school, they can
improve
their social interactions.
when
i
was a child, I
usually
played in the street. After I went to school I learned
a lot of
things such as teamwork, defending my rights.

Hello is it me you are looking for I can
see
in your eyes, I can
see
in your smiles

Some
people
believe that education plays a major role in the
lives
of
people
. I
strongly
agree
with that. Needless to say, when individuals learn
a lot of
new things in the school or college they can
improve
in
different
fields, and
also
they can serve the society more
effectively
.
On the other hand
, going to college may
help them to find
new qualities in themselves
specially
social interaction and the power of thinking. We all know that knowledge
makes
you stronger.

However
,
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IELTS essay when children go to school

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
142 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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