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when children go to school

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when children go to school, they can improve their social interactions. when i was a child, I usually played in the street. After I went to school I learned a lot of things such as teamwork, defending my rights. Hello is it me you are looking for I can see in your eyes, I can see in your smiles Some people believe that education plays a major role in the lives of people. I strongly agree with that. Needless to say, when individuals learn a lot of new things in the school or college they can improve in different fields, and also they can serve the society more effectively. On the other hand, going to college may help them to find new qualities in themselves specially social interaction and the power of thinking. We all know that knowledge makes you stronger. However,

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different
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