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What's your opinion? Do you think the internet is bad for young people?

Today internet is a easy medium for everyne to use. It is obvious that use more time online are the young people, with both positive and negative consequences. The main advantage of internet is that enables to learn more things easily, for instance a language. Another advantage of this topic is that everyone is connected to each other. The main advantage of internet is that enables to learn more things easily, for instance a language. Another advantage of this topic is that everyone is connected to each other. The most serious disadvantage of internet is the no security, because there isn't privacy and you don't know the person behind the screen, so it can be whoever. Another negative aspect of this argument is the waste of time, because we spend a lot of time for unnecessary things. In my opinion internet is a good things for young people however we shouldn't use them too much and badly.

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