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What’s your favourite room in your home?

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I am living in quite a small house in an urban. My house has 3 rooms, one room for my parents and the left are for me and my sister. My favourite room is definitely my own room which is the one represents myself and my personality. I decorated my room with a few stickers and numerous books on the bookcase. My parents are really into wooden furniture so my room has wooden stuff. Fortunately, I love wooden things and I don't mind having too much them. Even though I quite love my room, there are still some small spots I would love to change. For instance, my desk is really tiny which doesn't allow me to study properly. The wall has some small holes. As I turn on the air conditioner, cool air would all gush out. However, I still really love my room.
I am living in quite a
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has 3
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, one
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for my parents and the
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are for me and my sister. My
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favourite
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room
is definitely my
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own
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room
which is the one represents myself and my personality. I decorated my
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room
with a few stickers and numerous books on the bookcase. My parents are
really
into wooden furniture
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my
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has wooden stuff.
Fortunately
, I
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wooden things and I don't mind having too much them.
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my
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room
, there are
still
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spots I would
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change
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For instance
, my desk is
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tiny which doesn't
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allow
me to study
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. The wall has
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holes. As I turn on the air conditioner, cool air would all gush out.
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IELTS essay What’s your favourite room in your home?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
145 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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