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Can anyone in this world able to choose a future profession

Can anyone in this world able to choose a future profession 06LBq

In early childhood children tell their parents whom they would like to be when they grow up. In school students begin thinking of their future profession. There are lots of professions in the world, and all of them are interesting and exciting. So it's very hard to discover your vocation in life. The choice of profession depends on your abilities. If you are good at humanities you should choose something in this field. And if you are good at natural sciences you should choose something closely connected with them. I would like to become a chemist because I like chemistry. I think that it is a very interesting subject, but I am not so good at it so I think that I am not suitable for this profession. Inspite of all I possess some qualities which are needed in this field. I think that my future profession will be closely connected with computers. I am capable to work with them, and I also possess the qualities needed in this work. They are accuracy, energy, carefulness. But I hesitate if I have enough patience. I must develop it if I want to become a computer operator. I know that it would be better to choose a profession of an interpreter or any other occupation connected with Russian and literature because I am good at these subjects but when I began to study the computer skills that was what I have been looking for. In our modern world it's hard to do without computers. They are needed everywhere, and I hope that my interests in this subject will never change inspite of any circumstances.

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tell
 their parents whom they would like to be when they grow up. In school students This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 thinking of their future You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
. There are lots of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
professions
 in the world, and all of them are interesting and exciting. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
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very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to discover your vocation in life.

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profession
 depends on your abilities. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
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good
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good
 at natural sciences you should choose something closely
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because
 I like chemistry. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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very
 interesting subject, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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so
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good
 at it This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that I am not suitable for this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
. Possible spelling mistake found.InspireIn spite
Inspite
 of all I possess This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 qualities which are needed
 in this field.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 that my future You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
 will be closely
 connected with computers. I am capable to work with them, and I also
 possess the qualities needed in this work. They are accuracy, energy, carefulness. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I hesitate if I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 patience. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 develop it if I want to become a computer operator. I know that it would be better to choose a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withartbusinesscareerundertakingspecialtyfield
profession
 of an interpreter or any other occupation connected with Russian and literature This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I am You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgreatsatisfyingexceptionalpositiveacceptablesatisfactory
good
 at these subjects This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 when I began to study the computer This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
 that was what I have been looking for. In our modern world it's This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 to do without computers. They are needed
 everywhere, and I hope that my interests in this subject will never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
Possible spelling mistake found.inspirein spite
inspite
 of any circumstances. 