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What's your favourite kinds of film?

What's your favourite kinds of film? 9aEEp
actually, I'm a movie buff, I usually watch 3 - 4 episodes before going to bed. I try to enjoy as many different kinds of film as I can but especially blockbusters. It's quite thrilling that's why I and other people like them. that feeling is great, I hold my breath every time I watch. I prefer watching films at home but sometimes, you know, it totally depends. if it a big action film, If it is a big action film with lots of explosions, I would see it at the cinema you know, because, there, you get to see the movie on a big screen with a better sound system which will make the movie more impressive, you know.
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3 - 4
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going to bed. I try to enjoy as
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like them.
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feeling is great, I hold my breath every time I
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. I prefer watching films at home
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sometimes
, you know, it
totally
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it
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action film, If it is a
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big
action film with lots of explosions, I would
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it at the cinema you know,
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, there, you
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the movie on a
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screen with a better sound system which will
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the movie more impressive, you know.

IELTS essay What's your favourite kinds of film?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
120 words
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