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What's your favourite kinds of film?

What's your favourite kinds of film? 9aEEp
actually, I'm a movie buff, I usually watch 3 - 4 episodes before going to bed. I try to enjoy as many different kinds of film as I can but especially blockbusters. It's quite thrilling that's why I and other people like them. that feeling is great, I hold my breath every time I watch. I prefer watching films at home but sometimes, you know, it totally depends. if it a big action film, If it is a big action film with lots of explosions, I would see it at the cinema you know, because, there, you get to see the movie on a big screen with a better sound system which will make the movie more impressive, you know.
actually
, I'm a movie buff, I
usually
watch
3 - 4
episodes
before
going to bed. I try to enjoy as
many
different
kinds of film as I can
but
especially
blockbusters. It's quite thrilling that's why I and other
people
like them.
that
feeling is great, I hold my breath every time I
watch
. I prefer watching films at home
but
sometimes
, you know, it
totally
depends.
if
it
a
big
action film, If it is a
big
action film with lots of explosions, I would
see
it at the cinema you know,
because
, there, you
get
to
see
the movie on a
big
screen with a better sound system which will
make
the movie more impressive, you know.
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IELTS essay What's your favourite kinds of film?

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