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What's your favorite word and why?

What's your favorite word and why? YR2WB
It was a starry night and there is only one star that was the most prominent compared to the rest. And just like that, watching someone's success may lead us to feel the darkness of anger with a cold tone of hatred hidden deep inside our breathe. Apparently, the sweet taste of that feeling is named “jealousy" - another darker aspect of the human soul and is also known as my favorite word, which I called the beauty of jealousy. Like every other beautiful day at school, I and my best friend had such memorable moments. Having been a pretty prominent person at school and being cared for by teachers, everything around me was always perfect until a year later, the worst thing in my life happened to me, I was bullied and isolated at school. Without knowing the reason why things happened badly, going to school was such a nightmare for me and luckily I always had my best friend besides to support me. The definition of jealousy has never been so conspicuous for me which has a big impact on how I glow up and who I want to be. Consequently, I witnessed the viciousness of people as they got jealous and the benefits it gave to help them focus more on their goals. To put it differently, despite being bully got me depressed, my willpower tends to be stronger, I've learned to be more assertive and more upright than ever to deal with any problems. Gradually, I found the beauty behind jealousy that was a person who has their own ambition to look forward. Though it is true that being jealous can expose the ugly of perfection but make people more normal. At the end of my 11th grade, the truth was revealed when I found out that everything that happened was a misunderstanding, it was my best friend who settled all of it because of her jealousy and hatred. But I will never blame her for the jealousy that brought me the most pleasurable feeling of my life, I found my passion, became stronger than ever, and had strong relationships. All things considered, the people and things that evoke jealousy are simply holding the gift of showing you what you want.
It was a starry night and there is
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only
one star that was the most prominent compared to the rest. And
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just
like that, watching someone's success may lead us to feel the darkness of anger with a
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cold
tone of hatred hidden deep inside our
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breathe
.
Apparently
, the sweet taste of that feeling
is named
“jealousy
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another darker aspect of the human soul and is
also
known as my favorite word, which I called the beauty of jealousy.

Like every other
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beautiful
day at
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school
, I and my best friend had such memorable moments. Having been a pretty prominent person at
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school
and
being cared
for by teachers, everything around me was always perfect until a year later, the worst thing in my life happened to me, I
was bullied
and isolated at
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
. Without knowing the reason why things happened
badly
, going to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
school
was such a nightmare for me and luckily I always had my best friend
besides
to support me. The definition of
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jealousy
has never been
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so
conspicuous for me which has a
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big
impact on how I glow up and who I want to be.
Consequently
, I witnessed the viciousness of
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people
as they
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got
jealous and the benefits it gave to
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help
them focus more on their goals. To put it
differently
, despite being bully
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got
me depressed, my willpower tends to be stronger, I've learned to be more assertive and more upright than ever to deal with any problems.

Gradually
, I found the beauty behind
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jealousy
that was a person who has their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
ambition to look forward. Though it is true that being jealous can expose
The phrase 'the ugly of' is not correct. Use a noun, not an adjective, between 'the' and 'of'.
the ugly of
perfection
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but
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make
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people
more normal. At the
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end
of my 11th grade, the truth
was revealed
when I found out that everything that happened was a misunderstanding, it was my best friend who settled all of it
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because
of her
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jealousy
and hatred.
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But
I will never blame her for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
jealousy
that brought me the most pleasurable feeling of my life, I found my passion, became stronger than ever, and had strong relationships.

All things considered, the
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people
and things that evoke
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jealousy
are
simply
holding the gift of showing you what you want.
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IELTS essay What's your favorite word and why?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
375 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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