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Indeed, the education is provided by the government only and council have to make monopoly. It is thinking of few mankinds and they think that private education should be banned. Undoubtedly, there are many benefits of education provided by the government institutions and provate as well. I will discuss both the views in ensuig paragraphs Analysing the statement and explainig further, there are umpteen welfares which are provided by both of the groups. Primarily, each and every parent want to literate their child with the best education so the guardians send their toddlers to the council instititiions because the most of private school's owners make it only as a sourse of earnings. Meanwhile

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