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what your opinion about distance learning

It is a well-known fact that internet has changed our lives for the past few years. We can determine this change in education too as nowadays it is feasible that students can take their lessons from distance. I believe that distance learning do not provide the quality that a regular school does. To start with, studying from distance, except from the fact that learning is not so qualitative; the communication is more difficult as this in a real classroom. What I mean is that there is a high possibility for a student to have a bad internet connection. As a result the student will not be able to attend the class and lose all the notes and information. Continuing, learning from distance can be a very isolating experience. For example, students do not have the advantage of communicating with their friends but only via their phones. This is a very serious fact that schools and universities should pay attention to, otherwise problems may be occurred in the student. Furthermore, because everything happens at a distance, it follows that sharing, borrowing and other such functions, involving paperwork and assignments take more time, so students have less free time to rest or do their hobbies. Moreover, when learners are at a distance teachers’ work becomes more difficult. For example they cannot keep an eye on the learner’s performance and progress. Last but not least distance learning makes relationships more difficult as in many occasions the cameras are closed and there is no face contact between the teacher and the students. To end up I prefer by far classic learning in the school building, and as we do distance learning now because of a virus, I really want to return back to school to see my friends and teachers again.
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internet has
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changed
our
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lives
for the

past few years. We can determine this
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change
in education too as

nowadays it is feasible that
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students
can take their lessons from

distance. I believe that
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distance
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learning
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do
not provide the quality that

a regular
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school
does.

To
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start
with, studying from
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distance
, except from the fact that

learning is not
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so
qualitative; the communication is more difficult as this

in a real classroom. What I mean is that there is a high possibility for a

student to have a
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bad
internet connection.
As a result
the
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student
will

not be able to attend the
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class
and lose all the notes and information.

Continuing,
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learning
from
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distance
can be a
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very
isolating experience.

For example
,
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students
do not have the advantage of communicating

with their friends
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but
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only
via their phones. This is a
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very
serious fact

that
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schools
and universities should pay attention to,
otherwise


problems may
be occurred
in the student.

Furthermore
,
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because
everything happens at a
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distance
, it follows

that sharing, borrowing and other such functions, involving paperwork

and assignments take more time,
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so
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students
have less free time to rest

or do their hobbies.
Moreover
, when learners are at a
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distance
teachers’

work becomes more difficult. For
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keep
an eye on

the learner’s performance and progress. Last
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not
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distance

learning
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makes
relationships more difficult as in
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many
occasions the

cameras
are closed
and there is no face contact between the teacher

and the students.

To
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end
up I prefer by far classic
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learning
in the
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school
building, and

as we do
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distance
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learning
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now
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because
of a virus, I
really
want to
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to
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school
to
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see
my friends and teachers again.
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IELTS essay what your opinion about distance learning

Essay
  American English
6 paragraphs
297 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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