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I am going to talk about very exciting action which l have learnt it. When I was a child and dreamt of being very kind and proffesional doctor. Because the instruments of doctors were vrry amazing for me. A d I would want to cure people and kids. But after sone decades I changed my opinion. I wanted to be foreign languages teacher. Inglish language seemed to interesting for me. And I achieved my aim. Now I can say with happiness I aman English teacher. If I speak about being doctor I could not be. Last year I was ill many times because of shortcoming of blood. My mother in low is doctor so she always cures me. I paid attantion her while giving me injection. And I wanted to learn it. At first I tried to understand vein and body of person. I got i formation about ineeksi for ilness. After that I learnt to find vein. In the first time I practiced on my sister in. low. It was great. I believed myself. At a result I am home nurse now. And I can give injection my parents and my neihhbours but not kids. Also one thing, my parents are happy from my nursing.

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very
 kind and Possible spelling mistake found.professional
proffesional
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doctor
. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 the instruments of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withphysicianexpertspecialistprofessorscientistsurgeon
doctors
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 amazing for me. A d I would want to cure This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 my opinion. I wanted to be foreign Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean "languages'" or "language's"?languages'language's
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 teacher. Possible spelling mistake found.English
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 language seemed to interesting for me. And I achieved my aim. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
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 I can say with happiness I Possible spelling mistake found.manAlanAmmanOmanAmenamen
aman
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doctor
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many
 times This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of shortcoming of blood. My Possible typo. This word is usually spelled with hyphens: "mother-in-law".mother-in-law
mother in low
 is You use this word too often, consider replacing it withphysicianexpertspecialistprofessorscientistsurgeon
doctor
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 she always cures me. I paid Possible spelling mistake found.attention
attantion
 her while giving me injection. And I wanted to learn it. At The comma is probably missing here: "first, I".first, I
first I
 tried to understand vein and body of person. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 i formation about Possible spelling mistake found.weeksneedsintenseseeksGreeksinverse
ineeksi
 for Possible spelling mistake found.illness
ilness
. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 that I Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
 to find vein. In the first
 time I practiced on my sister in. low. It was great. I believed myself. At a result I am home nurse This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
. And I can give injection my parents and my Possible spelling mistake found.neighbors
neihhbours
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 not kids. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Also,
Also
 one thing, my parents are happy from my nursing. 