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criminal behavior has genetic cause/others belives that circumstance leads to committing a crime. discuss both views and give your opinion,

criminal behavior has genetic cause/others belives that circumstance leads to committing a crime. discuss both views and give your opinion, X7rXN

crime is not inherent, it is highly affected by the environment and influence of a society, group, or even by a person. misdeed is not a trait that transfer through chromosome, it is an idea or a habit that slowly grows in a human being because of the moral value or information, one is getting from the outer world alone. we humans have a habit of learning things and are very quick in it, some know the difference between right and wrong, can filter while others consume everything they can observe in day-to-day activities. For example; a child who grew in a rich family and a street orphan kid has different circumstances. A hungry child, a greedy human, and even an angry animal may cause a lot of damage to society and cause a lot of criminal activities. Each with a different skill set and ethics, on the other hand Children do generally follow the older footsteps, that is a genetic habit. If they see any of their family members convicted of any crimes they do have the same kind of mindset and also get into some kind of evil works from the younger age and as well as influence other younger members of the family or friends, eventually, the one rotten apple will decay the whole caret. moreover, some genes and enzymes present in the body from their parents make people more aggressive, as a habit is a heredity a genetic cause. to conclude, crimes happen and both genetic causes and circumstances lead to a crime, it does not matter if the circumstance is special or have a genetic cause, sometimes they co-exist, and most of the time one of the factors can be seen in an outrage criminal.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCrime
crime
 is not inherent, it is highly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :impacted
affected
 by the environment and influence of a society, group, or even by a person.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMisdeed
misdeed
 is not a trait that transfer through chromosome, it is an This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 or a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstylenaturepatternquirkcustomthing
habit
 that slowly
 grows in a human being

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because
 of the moral value or information, one is getting from the outer world alone.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWe
we
 humans have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstylenaturepatternquirkcustomthing
habit
 of learning things and are This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
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some
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wrong
,

can filter while others consume everything they can observe in day-to-day activities. For example
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different
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This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMay
may
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cause
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a lot of
 damage to society and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withoriginmotivationmatterexplanationelementmotive
cause
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a lot of
 criminal activities. Each with a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
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skill
 set and ethics, on the other hand


Children do generally
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genetic
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habit
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see
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crimes
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get
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some
 kind of evil works from the younger age and as well
 as influence

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other
 younger members of the family or friends, eventually
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moreover
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some
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people
 more aggressive, as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstylenaturepatternquirkcustomthing
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 is a heredity a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withancestralhistoricalhereditary
genetic
 cause.

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTo
to
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crimes
 happen and both You use this word too often, consider replacing it withancestralhistoricalhereditary
genetic
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causes
 and circumstances lead to a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcaselawlessnessviolationfelonymisdemeanorinfraction
crime
, it does not matter if the circumstance is special

or have a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withancestralhistoricalhereditary
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cause
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sometimes
 they co-exist, and most of the time one of the factors can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
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