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criminal behavior has genetic cause/others belives that circumstance leads to committing a crime. discuss both views and give your opinion,

criminal behavior has genetic cause/others belives that circumstance leads to committing a crime. discuss both views and give your opinion, X7rXN
crime is not inherent, it is highly affected by the environment and influence of a society, group, or even by a person. misdeed is not a trait that transfer through chromosome, it is an idea or a habit that slowly grows in a human being because of the moral value or information, one is getting from the outer world alone. we humans have a habit of learning things and are very quick in it, some know the difference between right and wrong, can filter while others consume everything they can observe in day-to-day activities. For example; a child who grew in a rich family and a street orphan kid has different circumstances. A hungry child, a greedy human, and even an angry animal may cause a lot of damage to society and cause a lot of criminal activities. Each with a different skill set and ethics, on the other hand Children do generally follow the older footsteps, that is a genetic habit. If they see any of their family members convicted of any crimes they do have the same kind of mindset and also get into some kind of evil works from the younger age and as well as influence other younger members of the family or friends, eventually, the one rotten apple will decay the whole caret. moreover, some genes and enzymes present in the body from their parents make people more aggressive, as a habit is a heredity a genetic cause. to conclude, crimes happen and both genetic causes and circumstances lead to a crime, it does not matter if the circumstance is special or have a genetic cause, sometimes they co-exist, and most of the time one of the factors can be seen in an outrage criminal.
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crime
is not inherent, it is
highly
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affected
by the environment and influence of a society, group, or even by a person.

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misdeed
is not a trait that transfer through chromosome, it is an
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idea
or a
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habit
that
slowly
grows in a human being

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because
of the moral value or information, one is getting from the outer world alone.

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we
humans have a
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habit
of learning things and are
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very
quick in it,
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some
know the difference between right and
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wrong
,

can filter while others consume everything they can observe in day-to-day activities.
For example
; a child who grew

in a rich family and a street orphan kid has
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different
circumstances. A hungry child, a greedy human, and even an angry
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animal


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may
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cause
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a lot of
damage to society and
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cause
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a lot of
criminal activities. Each with a
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different
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skill
set and ethics,
on the other hand


Children do
generally
follow the older footsteps,
that is
a
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genetic
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habit
.
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If
they
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see
any of their family members convicted
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of


any
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crimes
they do have the same kind of mindset and
also
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get
into
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some
kind of evil works from the younger age and
as well
as influence

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other
younger members of the family or friends,
eventually
, the one rotten apple will decay the whole caret.
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moreover
,
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some
genes and

enzymes present in the body from their parents
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make
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people
more aggressive, as a
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habit
is a heredity a
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genetic
cause.

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to
conclude,
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crimes
happen and both
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genetic
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causes
and circumstances lead to a
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crime
, it does not matter if the circumstance is special

or have a
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genetic
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cause
,
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sometimes
they co-exist, and most of the time one of the factors can be
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seen
in an outrage criminal.
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IELTS essay criminal behavior has genetic cause/others belives that circumstance leads to committing a crime. discuss both views and give your opinion,

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