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we have seen the advantages as well as the dark side when we are famous.

we have seen the advantages as well as the dark side when we are famous. kLKDK
After reading the article “How to become famous” we have seen the advantages as well as the dark side when we are famous. If you become famous, more known, you will have more opportunities, new relationships and it also means that you have to accept the loss of privacy, being scrutinized by others and more careful in your words or you may even lose friends and relationships. Becoming famous changes your life completely, for the better or the worse. Nowadays, there is a part of young people who want to become famous so they post and reveal some pictures or videos that are sensitive and sexy of themselves to attract attention without thinking about the consequences later. Through this article, I hope readers can realize the good and bad sides of being famous, not always being famous will make life better. Just pursue your dreams of doing what you want to do and focus on what you're good at and be the best you can be. Even if you don't become famous, you can still make a big difference in people's lives!
After reading the article “How to
become
famous”
we have
seen
the advantages
as well
as the dark side when we are
famous
. If you
become
famous
, more known, you will have more opportunities, new relationships and it
also
means that you
have to
accept the loss of privacy,
being scrutinized
by others and more careful in your words or you may even lose friends and relationships. Becoming
famous
changes
your life completely, for the better or the worse. Nowadays, there is a part of young
people
who want to
become
famous
so
they post and reveal
some
pictures or videos that are sensitive and sexy of themselves to attract attention without thinking about the consequences later. Through this article, I hope readers can realize the
good
and
bad
sides of being
famous
, not always being
famous
will
make
life better.
Just
pursue your dreams of doing what you want to do and focus on what you're
good
at and be the best you can be. Even if you don't
become
famous
, you can
still
make
a
big
difference in
people
's
lives
!
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IELTS essay we have seen the advantages as well as the dark side when we are famous.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
182 words
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