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What will you do to find a good job

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I will graduate next year and will have to find a job soon after. I'll apply for an assistant job in a foreign company because Salary and working conditions in foreign companies are quite good, and I will gain a lot of experience. Getting a job like this is not easy, especially for fresh graduates. since these companies require high levels of English, I need to study very hard by myself and through English classes. In addition, creating a great CV is vital to impressing employers. therefore, I plan to take some related courses such as computer skill and financial markets. These could give me an advantage over other applicants. Besides searching for jobs via the internet, I ask family or friends if they know of any companies that I'm interested in.

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 and financial markets. These could give me an advantage over other applicants. Besides
 searching for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
jobs
 via the internet, I ask family or friends if they know of any You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgroupclubcommunityteampartyassociation
companies
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