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LONDON UNDERGROUND STATION

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LONDON IS A BIG CITY AND A HUGE BUSINESS PLACE. PEOPLE FROM DIFFERENT COUNTRIES LIVE HERE FOR THEIR WELL-BEING. FOR LIVELIHOOD ONE HAS TO TRAVEL FROM ONE REGION TO ANOTHER SO FOR THIS THEY NEED A MODE OF TRANSPORTATION. THE STATING OF THE VEHICLE STARTS FROM 6 AM IN THE MORNING AND ENDS AT 10 PM IN THE EVENING. IN THE EARLY TIME AROUND 100 NUMBER OF PASSENGERS TRAVEL AND AFTER AND HOUR INCREASES TO DOUBLE AND TH EPEAK TIME IS AROUND 8 AM WHICH IS FOR OFFICE, SCHOOL, COLLEGE AND BUSINESS CLASS THE BUSIEST AMONG ALL. SECOND HIGHEST IS THE EVENING HOUR AROUND 6 PM WHERE AROUNG 350 PLUS PEOPLE TRAVEL AND IS THE CLOSING HOURS OF SCHOOLS, COLLEGES, OFFICES ETC. THE TIME ITSELF DEPICTS THE USE OF THE STATION FOR THE NEEDY PEOPLE WITHOUT VEHICLES OR FOR THE PEOPLE WHO DONT LIKED TO GET STRUCKED IN THE ROAD TRAFFIC.
LONDON IS A
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BIG
CITY AND A HUGE BUSINESS PLACE.
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PEOPLE
FROM
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DIFFERENT
COUNTRIES
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LIVE
HERE FOR THEIR WELL-BEING. FOR LIVELIHOOD ONE
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HAS TO
TRAVEL FROM ONE REGION TO ANOTHER
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SO
FOR THIS THEY NEED A MODE OF TRANSPORTATION. THE STATING OF THE VEHICLE
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STARTS
FROM 6
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AM IN THE MORNING
AND ENDS AT 10
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PM IN THE EVENING
. IN THE EARLY TIME AROUND 100 NUMBER OF PASSENGERS TRAVEL AND AFTER AND HOUR INCREASES TO DOUBLE AND
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TH EPEAK
TIME IS AROUND 8 AM WHICH IS FOR OFFICE, SCHOOL, COLLEGE AND BUSINESS
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CLASS
THE BUSIEST AMONG ALL. SECOND HIGHEST IS THE EVENING HOUR AROUND 6 PM WHERE
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AROUNG
350 PLUS
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PEOPLE
TRAVEL AND IS THE CLOSING HOURS OF SCHOOLS, COLLEGES, OFFICES ETC. THE TIME ITSELF DEPICTS THE
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USE
OF THE STATION FOR THE NEEDY
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PEOPLE
WITHOUT VEHICLES OR FOR THE
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PEOPLE
WHO
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DONT
LIKED TO
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GET STRUCKED
IN THE ROAD TRAFFIC.
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IELTS essay LONDON UNDERGROUND STATION

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
151 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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