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Ways to save animals from extinction

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Well, I think we can go about this in a number of ways to save animals from extinction. To me seems that one promising technique for saving animals is to set a careful and sustained program of conservation to inform people and increasing their knowledge about special spices. This solution can measurey increased the effection by involving volunteers program and environmentalist NGO’s Another way to save animals from extinction is for government to provide funds for the nature reserves. I mean allocate budget to learning courses and improving the knowledge of endangered animals it is quite likely that this issue is solved in no time. Using eco-friendly products will also be an effective way to get root of this problem. maybe this way is not effective in short-term plan but it gives rise to long-term plan efficiency of saving animals.
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we can go about this in a number of ways to save
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animals
from extinction.

To me seems that one promising technique for saving
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animals
is to set a careful and sustained program of conservation to inform
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people
and increasing their knowledge about special spices. This solution can
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increased the
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effection
by involving volunteers program and environmentalist NGO’s

Another way to save
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animals
from extinction is for
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government
to provide funds for the nature reserves. I mean allocate budget to learning courses and improving the knowledge of endangered
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animals
it is quite likely that this issue
is solved
in no time.

Using eco-friendly products will
also
be an effective way to
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get
root of this problem.
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maybe
this way is not effective in short-term plan
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it gives rise to long-term plan efficiency of saving
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animals
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IELTS essay Ways to save animals from extinction

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
140 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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