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what will you do in the future when you become parents

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In my future, if I have my children, I definitely want to become a good role model for them. Since children are likely to learn a lot about how to act by watching their parents, I want to show them my positive behaviours and attitudes. I hope to become a friend with them, helping them to feel safe, loved and comfortable to confess whenever at home. Also, I think idependence plays an integral part in one’s life so I want to leave a room for my children to grow, giving them space to handle things on their own and I will be willing to help them and explain their mistakes if things go wrong.
In my future, if I have my children, I definitely want to become a
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good
role model for them. Since children are likely to learn a lot about how to act by watching their parents, I want to
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show
them my
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positive
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behaviours
and attitudes. I hope to become a friend with them, helping them to feel safe,
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loved
and comfortable to confess whenever at home.
Also
, I
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think
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idependence
plays an integral part in one’s life
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so
I want to
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leave
a room for my children to grow, giving them space to handle things on their
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own
and I will be willing to
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help
them and
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explain
their mistakes if things go
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wrong
.
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IELTS essay what will you do in the future when you become parents

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
114 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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