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Nowadays, a lot of animals are in danger. What are the reasons for this problem? What do you think you can do to help the animals and stop them from becoming extinct?

Nowadays, a lot of animals are in danger. What are the reasons for this problem? What do you think you can do to help the animals and stop them from becoming extinct? MqGAq
Population growth, environmental pollution and global climate change are indirect causes of wildlife decline. Humans are over-exploiting natural resources, polluting ecosystems and displacing communities. Overexploited animals, such as hunting animals for human consumption, are not only devastating in terms of habitat, but poaching is also one of the main causes leading to a serious decline in population. wild animals. Changes in ecosystem composition such as when a species is reduced or extinct will lead to the decline of the species that use that species for food. Invasion of alien species can disrupt the ecological balance and reduce native animal populations.
Population growth, environmental pollution and global climate
change
are indirect causes of wildlife decline. Humans are over-exploiting natural resources, polluting ecosystems and displacing communities.
Overexploited
animals
, such as hunting
animals
for human consumption, are not
only
devastating in terms of habitat,
but
poaching is
also
one of the main causes leading to a serious decline in population.
wild
animals
.
Changes
in ecosystem composition such as when a species is
reduced
or extinct will lead to the decline of the species that
use
that species for food. Invasion of alien species can disrupt the ecological balance and
reduce
native
animal
populations.
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IELTS essay Nowadays, a lot of animals are in danger. What are the reasons for this problem? What do you think you can do to help the animals and stop them from becoming extinct?

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