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What will the typical home in 2025

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A house in 2050 will be a lot different from what it is today. First of all, the devices in the home will be more modern and touch-sensitive, which makes people's lives easier and more comfortable than before. For example, when returning home, it automatically senses that someone turns it on and off. The walls of the house can also be changed to suit the mood, you do not need to spend any money on painting the walls. Second, the house in the future may be smaller but scientifically and neatly arranged. In particular, it can be mentioned as a wardrobe combined with a bed that we have seen some places apply now, in the future there will be many more things that combine to create two-in-one items. for human life. Finally, our homes in 2025 will probably have robots. These robots are like maid robots that help people to do housework while they are away. For instance, robots help people clean, cook, take care of the elderly or children, take dogs for a walk. . . this helps people save part of their work after a long tiring day at work and have time to work. More time for family.
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in the future may be smaller
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probably
have robots. These robots are like maid robots that
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help
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clean, cook, take care of the elderly or children, take dogs for a walk.
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IELTS essay What will the typical home in 2025

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
201 words
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