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What will be the pros and cons of maternity leave.

What will be the pros and cons of maternity leave. RRpNp
There are a time when womwn take maternity leave. There are plenty of benefits and drawbacks effects of this trend. To begin with, there are multifarious advantages of parental leave. The first and foremost, women will be able to spent quality time with there cute babies without any financial concern. To make it more clear, after a birth baby need to their mother for nourishment and take care because only mother know all things what their baby need. Mother plays pivotal role in their baby growth. Secondly, mother will be able to afford neccessary medical health care for themselves and offspring too. To explain it,
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know all things what their baby need.
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IELTS essay What will be the pros and cons of maternity leave.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
105 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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