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What was I think went I were young and now

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Everyone has what they want and want to be, and so do I. Even though what I want to be is constantly changing. In my childhood, I used to think If I were a princess, I would wear beautiful outfits every day. That's because when I was a kid, I liked watching Barbie cartoons. If you think back, it's a very funny memory. As I got older, my thoughts grew too. I think making the best of the present is very important. Because I've been taught that over time it doesn't flow back. If I study science harder I must have passed the science exam. That's what happened in the 3rd grade. I should have read more books. At this moment, if I study hard, I will pass the exam. which is what I am doing on purpose But of course, if I'm tired, I go to sleep because overdoing it is not good. What I would like to say is to be happy with the present and to keep things as lessons in life because what has happened in the past we can't go back and fix, we can just keep it as a lesson.
Everyone has what they want and want to be, and
so
do I.
Even though
what I want to be is
constantly
changing. In my childhood, I
used
to
think
If I were a princess, I would wear
beautiful
outfits every day. That's
because
when I was a kid, I liked watching Barbie cartoons. If you
think
back, it's a
very
funny
memory. As I
got
older, my thoughts grew too. I
think
making the best of the present is
very
important
.
Because
I've
been taught
that over time it doesn't flow back.
If
I study science harder I
must
have passed the science exam. That's what happened in the 3rd grade. I should have read more books. At this moment, if I study
hard
, I will pass the exam.
which
is what I am doing on purpose
But
of course
, if I'm tired, I go to sleep
because
overdoing it is not
good
. What I would like to say is to be happy with the present and to
keep
things as lessons in life
because
what has happened in the past we can't go back and
fix
, we can
just
keep
it as a lesson.
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IELTS essay What was I think went I were young and now

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
196 words
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5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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