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What was I think went I were young and now

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Everyone has what they want and want to be, and so do I. Even though what I want to be is constantly changing. In my childhood, I used to think If I were a princess, I would wear beautiful outfits every day. That's because when I was a kid, I liked watching Barbie cartoons. If you think back, it's a very funny memory. As I got older, my thoughts grew too. I think making the best of the present is very important. Because I've been taught that over time it doesn't flow back. If I study science harder I must have passed the science exam. That's what happened in the 3rd grade. I should have read more books. At this moment, if I study hard, I will pass the exam. which is what I am doing on purpose But of course, if I'm tired, I go to sleep because overdoing it is not good. What I would like to say is to be happy with the present and to keep things as lessons in life because what has happened in the past we can't go back and fix, we can just keep it as a lesson.

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so
 do I. Even though
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used
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think
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beautiful
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because
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think
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funny
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got
 older, my thoughts grew too. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
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important
. “Because” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Because
 I've been taught
 that over time it doesn't flow back. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 I study science harder I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :require
must
 have passed the science exam. That's what happened in the 3rd grade. I should have read more books. At this moment, if I study This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
, I will pass the exam. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWhich
which
 is what I am doing on purpose This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
of course
, if I'm tired, I go to sleep This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 overdoing it is not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. What I would like to say is to be happy with the present and to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 things as lessons in life This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 what has happened in the past we can't go back and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
, we can This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 it as a lesson. 