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What springs to your mind when you hear the word “Happiness”? Are you happy when you live in Vietnam? Why?

What springs to your mind when you hear the word “Happiness”? Are you happy when you live in Vietnam? Why? r6aDo
When I hear the word "Happiness", something comes up to my mind is making memories with my favourite people. It is not about making huge things, but just some small simple things. For example, I can have a warm dinner with my parents after a hard-working day, hang out with my friends and do best thing together. Moreover, I feel extremely happy when I have been born and live in Vietnam, especially during this covid-19. I love the beautiful places, the food, people, culture, . . . I'm in love with all the things of Vietnam.
When I hear the word
"
Happiness
"
, something
comes
up to my mind is making memories with my
favourite
people
. It is not about making huge things,
but
just
some
small
simple things.
For example
, I can have a warm dinner with my parents after a
hard
-working day, hang out with my friends and do best thing together.
Moreover
, I feel
extremely
happy when I have
been born
and
live
in Vietnam,
especially
during this
covid-19
. I
love
the
beautiful
places, the food,
people
, culture
, .
.
.
I'm in
love
with all the things of Vietnam.
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IELTS essay What springs to your mind when you hear the word “Happiness”? Are you happy when you live in Vietnam? Why?

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  American English
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96 words
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