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Write a essay about according to you Which Language is important English or local language?

Write a essay about according to you Which Language is important English or local language? ebEdJ

English language is very important for people around the world but teaching local languages is also very important however, organization hired only those candidates who can speak fluent English, because they have to interact with international clients as well. In many countries English is their first language however if you know how to speak English it makes your life easier and build confidence you travel anywhere in the world if you know how to speak English but local language is equally important to learn to stay connected with thier culture. Hence I believe both the languages are important to survive in the world.

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