Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

extracurricular activities are growing in popularity. some people think its good for teens while others think its bad. to what extent do you agree or disagree

extracurricular activities are growing in popularity. some people think its good for teens while others think its bad. 2aKAM

In this day and age, there is a prevalence among youngsters taking part in social activities which can be attributed to copious purposes. in my opinion, these activities are beneficial in light of the merits they generate, however, there are still some drawbacks remain that should be taken into consideration On the positive side, it is noteworthy that juveniles, mainly their cultivation, can considerably benefit from these activities. Through these activities, they can sharpen their social skills besides acquiring empirical knowledge as many organizations offer their participants the chance to get to know more about their surroundings, promote their awareness and consciousness to the catastrophes faced by others. Moreover, these activities are likely to heighten the chance of the youths to get a scholarship. Besides superb academic studying, one of the utmost keys for a scholarship that international schools are looking for in their applicants is community contribution. applicants with a high rate of community contribution will more likely to win the tender than those having a low frequency of partaking in social activities Apart from the aforementioned merits above, some repercussions should be taken into consideration. Social activities will likely to interfere between students and their school work as some are too absorbed in joining organizations and will choose to give priority to the activities rather than the homework. students these days are overwhelmed with homework, especially those in the last school years. therefore, social activities might not be a good choice for them as they would suffer from time mismanagement and above all fatigue In light of the aforementioned analysis, social activities are vital for better development albeit they have some drawbacks. suitable measures should be taken to deal with the matter of time mismanagement and exhaustion for students joining these organizations

In this day and age, there is a prevalence among youngsters taking part in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 which can be attributed
 to copious purposes. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIn
in
 my opinion, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 are beneficial in light of the merits they generate, however
, there are still
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 drawbacks remain that should be taken
 into Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphconsideration.consideration!consideration?consideration:consideration,consideration;
consideration


On the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 side, it is noteworthy that juveniles, mainly
 their cultivation, can considerably
 benefit from these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
. Through these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
, they can sharpen their You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :proficiencies
skills
besides
 acquiring empirical knowledge as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 organizations offer their participants the chance to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 to know more about their surroundings, promote their awareness and consciousness to the catastrophes faced by others. Moreover
, these You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 are likely to heighten the chance of the youths to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a scholarship. Besides
 superb academic studying, one of the utmost keys for a scholarship that international schools are looking for in their applicants is community contribution. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterApplicants
applicants
 with a high rate of community contribution will more likely to win the tender than those having a low frequency of partaking in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphactivities.activities!activities?activities:activities,activities;
activities


Apart from the aforementioned merits above, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 repercussions should be taken
 into consideration. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
Social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 will likely to interfere between students and their school work as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 are too absorbed in joining organizations and will choose to give priority to the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
rather
 than the homework. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterStudents
students
 these days are overwhelmed
 with homework, especially
 those in the last school years. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterTherefore
therefore
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 might not be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 choice for them as they would suffer from time mismanagement and above all
 fatigue

In light of the aforementioned analysis, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcivilcommunal
social
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withactionlifeenterpriseexercisemovement
activities
 are vital for better development albeit they have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 drawbacks. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSuitable
suitable
 measures should be taken
 to deal with the matter of time mismanagement and exhaustion for students joining these Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphorganizations.organizations!organizations?organizations:organizations,organizations;
organizations