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What skills, qualities and experiences have prepared you to undertake this programme? What value do you think you can add to the learning community as part of an internationally diverse group? What impact do you hope to make in your future career, and how will this programme contribute to your aspirations?

What skills, qualities and experiences have prepared you to undertake this programme? What value do you think you can add to the learning community as part of an internationally diverse group? What impact do you hope to make in your future career, and how will this programme contribute to your aspirations? AraBM
The latter of my academic period at high school in 2012, a huge decision did I choose to shift from the natural science that I had already been spending almost three years for social science, while finally deciding accounting as my discipline at the university. At first, I was inspired by my dad at the moment while we were discussing about adulthood. As a person who involved in this subject for many years, he taught me the basic concept of accounting that could be intertwined with my daily life, such as managing financial cash inflow and outflow for my income. My interest was flourished as I knew the total proportion of accounting graduates who are consistently pursuing the professional classification in Indonesia are still far from its required. It creates a resultant void that I can fill in later on. During my college period, my keen interest in accounting had been intensified as I was selected as part of Assistant Lecturer in Accounting under Faculty of Economics and Business at Brawijaya University. It gave me space to transform my theoretical knowledge into experiential by giving classes to new students as well as creating and discussing the materials with the lecturers. Besides, I also contributed as a member of the Human Development Department at this organization and participated in the program called “eksistensi” where all students who faced difficulties in every subject related to accounting could be mentored outside the requisite classroom with small-group-discussion method. Last year, my work experience on audit a FinTech industry was one of the most interesting yet exhausting experiences of my life since it is categorized as a new model financial business in Indonesia. Although it was both emotionally yet physically demanding, it instilled in me a resolute desire to comprehend the business wholly. Here, I was espoused by the specific areas of audit that are newly implemented in Indonesia. Thus, strong communication skill and technical capability are a must, as I communicated regularly with my manager, partner and clients which consisted of brainstorming and applied professional judgement to book provision properly in the financial statement according to the applicable regulation. Throughout my involvement, I had been able to contribute by giving several provision scenarios based on macro economic research related to the business. Likewise, my responsible as a senior in-charge over several companies under one parent company required me to have superb time management and leadership skill. Working with several parties, including internal teams other than audit, required a lot of effort attention, so all the deliverables were able to meet the deadlines. Towards my responsibilities, I had been able to empathize with teammates, the regulator and clients, developing my understanding of the importance of the holistic perspective that the multidisciplinary team provided. We synergised to finish the engagement on time before the latest submitted reporting date. Through my experience, I have realized that accountant might be a challenging job yet demanding sacrifices. Nevertheless, I believe by registering in this program, I could strengthen my academic pillar alongside the experience I got by far. Near the future, as business is burgeoning, the demand for the accountants to give the reliability of financial statements will be enormous. Being part of the business, I hope I can contribute in retaining the credibility towards the quality of the profession and giving value added through the quality of financial statement in specific, which directly impact on increasing the reassurance of the corresponding parties whom use it.
The latter of my academic period at high school in 2012, a huge decision did I choose to shift from the natural science that I had already been spending almost three years for social science, while
finally
deciding
accounting
as my discipline at the university. At
first
, I
was inspired
by my dad at the moment while we were
discussing about adulthood
. As a person who involved in this subject for
many
years, he taught me the basic concept of
accounting
that could
be intertwined
with my daily life, such as managing
financial
cash inflow and outflow for my income. My interest
was flourished
as I knew the total proportion of
accounting
graduates who are
consistently
pursuing the professional classification in Indonesia are
still
far from its required. It creates a resultant void that I can fill in later on.

During my college period, my keen interest in
accounting
had
been intensified
as I
was selected
as part of Assistant Lecturer in
Accounting
under Faculty of Economics and
Business
at
Brawijaya
University. It gave me space to transform my theoretical knowledge into experiential by giving classes to new students
as well
as creating and discussing the materials with the lecturers.
Besides
, I
also
contributed as a member of the Human Development Department at this organization and participated in the program called “
eksistensi
” where all students who faced difficulties in every subject related to
accounting
could
be mentored
outside the requisite classroom with
small
-group-discussion method.

Last year, my work
experience
on audit a FinTech industry was one of the most interesting
yet
exhausting
experiences
of my life since it
is categorized
as a new model
financial
business
in Indonesia. Although it was both
emotionally
yet
physically
demanding, it instilled in me a resolute desire to comprehend the
business
wholly. Here, I
was espoused
by the specific areas of audit that are
newly
implemented in Indonesia.
Thus
, strong communication
skill
and technical capability are a
must
, as I communicated
regularly
with my manager, partner and clients which consisted of brainstorming and applied professional judgement to book provision
properly
in the
financial
statement according to the applicable regulation. Throughout my involvement, I had been able to contribute by giving several provision scenarios based on macro economic research related to the
business
.
Likewise
, my responsible as a senior in-charge over several
companies
under one parent
company
required me to have superb time management and leadership
skill
. Working with several parties, including internal teams other than audit, required
a lot of
effort attention,
so
all the deliverables were able to
meet
the deadlines. Towards my responsibilities, I had been able to empathize with teammates, the regulator and clients, developing my understanding of the importance of the holistic perspective that the multidisciplinary team provided. We
synergised
to finish the engagement on time
before
the latest submitted reporting date.

Through my
experience
, I have realized that accountant might be a challenging job
yet
demanding sacrifices.
Nevertheless
, I believe by registering in this program, I could strengthen my academic pillar alongside the
experience
I
got
by far. Near the future, as
business
is burgeoning, the demand for the accountants to give the reliability of
financial
statements will be enormous. Being part of the
business
, I hope I can contribute in retaining the credibility towards the quality of the profession and giving value
added
through the quality of
financial
statement in specific, which
directly
impact on increasing the reassurance of the corresponding parties whom
use
it.
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