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What risks can a person take to achieve success? What can he sacrifice? The movie “Nightcrawler” which is written and directed by Dan Gilroy, tells the story of an ambitious video freelancer who will do anything to advance in his career.

What risks can a person take to achieve success? What can he sacrifice? The movie “Nightcrawler” which is written and directed by Dan Gilroy, tells the story of an ambitious video freelancer who will do anything to advance in his career. The main character, Lou Bloom, starts to sell crime-scene footages to news producers and does not hesitate to use shocking methods to get visuals from crime scenes. It is not based on a true story but yet the director Dan Gilroy took inspiration from real life while he was creating the script. Also, he made his directorial debut with this psychological-thriller film of 2014.
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can a person take to achieve success? What can he sacrifice? The movie “Nightcrawler” which
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the story of an ambitious video freelancer who will do anything to advance in his career. The main character, Lou Bloom,
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visuals from crime scenes. It is not based on a true story
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the director Dan Gilroy took inspiration from real life while he was creating the script.
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, he made his directorial debut with this psychological-thriller film of 2014.
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IELTS essay What risks can a person take to achieve success? What can he sacrifice? The movie “Nightcrawler” which is written and directed by Dan Gilroy, tells the story of an ambitious video freelancer who will do anything to advance in his career.

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  American English
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105 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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