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What problem will your country face in the next ten years? How can this problems be overcome? Give relevant solutions including examples/reasons.

What problem will your country face in the next ten years? How can this problems be overcome? Give relevant solutions including examples/reasons. Prm8J
In this question the main indicator is about problems. There are several burning problems that our country are facing and also will face in the next ten years. In my opinion country will face about environmental problems. And this aspects are explained in the ensuing paragraphs. From the first side the habitat issue like air pollution, water pollution, noise pollution and so on. There are many reasons for that situation. And the most common reason is that population. These days population are enlarging rapidly and also industries. Which is making our country dangerous. Generally, air pollution and water pollution are one of the most major complications in our country and in the whole world. On the other hand usually this kind of issue occurred by more use of vehicles and chemicals respectively. And if we want to mitigate this type of worry. Therefore we should bring down the use of vehicles, gasoline, electricity and many others. So problems will not be occur in the next years. It will not create health issue also. Thus, to conclude the topic it can be finally commented that the environmental problems and it will have very disastrous effect, So we should try to alleviate it.
In this question the main indicator is about
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problems
. There are several burning
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problems
that our
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country
are facing and
also
will face in the
next
ten years. In my opinion
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country
will face about environmental
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problems
. And
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this
aspects are
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explained
in the ensuing paragraphs.

From the
first
side the habitat issue like air
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pollution
, water
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pollution
, noise
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pollution
and
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so
on. There are
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many
reasons for that situation. And the most common reason is that population. These
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days
population are enlarging
rapidly
and
also
industries.
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Which
is making our
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country
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dangerous
.
Generally
, air
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pollution
and water
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pollution
are one of the most major complications in our
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country
and in the whole world.

On the other hand
usually
this kind of issue occurred by more
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of vehicles and chemicals
respectively
. And if we want to mitigate this type of worry.
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Therefore
we should bring down the
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use
of vehicles, gasoline, electricity and
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many
others.
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So
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problems
will not be
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occur
in the
next
years. It will not create health issue
also
.

Thus
,
to conclude
the topic it can be
finally
commented that the environmental
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problems
and it will have
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very
disastrous effect,
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So
we should try to alleviate it.
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IELTS essay What problem will your country face in the next ten years? How can this problems be overcome? Give relevant solutions including examples/reasons.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
201 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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