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What obstacles do you predict in the relationship between Mickey and Linda?

What obstacles do you predict in the relationship between Mickey and Linda? 5BVRQ
I personally think that in the future Linda will rethink about her love for Mickey. She'll have to make sure whether it's worth for the time she spends with him, in addition for her efforts of helping Mickey. Eventhough the author presents Linda as a perfect natural match for Mickey from the start of the play, we can also predict that there will be a love triangle between the twins, which is Edward and Mickey, and Linda. I'm not sure whether Linda will have any sort of cheating actions due to the fact that in the relationship with Mickey, Linda always be the strong one. Forcing a girl during a relationship with a man to be the strong one will lead to many consequences, for example lack of interests and breaking up with her boyfriend. This will also explain if Linda will cheat on Mickey with someone else. Because they were doing school at that time, so they'll probably be seperated from what they love to do.
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personally
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that in the future Linda will rethink about her
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love
for Mickey. She'll
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have to
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sure whether it's worth for the time she spends with him,
in addition
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the author presents Linda as a perfect natural match for Mickey from the
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start
of the play, we can
also
predict that there will be a
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love
triangle between the twins, which is Edward and Mickey, and Linda. I'm not sure whether Linda will have any sort of cheating actions due to the fact that in the relationship with Mickey, Linda always be the strong one. Forcing a girl during a relationship with a
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man
to be the strong one will lead to
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many
consequences,
for example
lack of interests and breaking up with her boyfriend. This will
also
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explain
if Linda will cheat on Mickey with someone else.
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Because
they were doing school at that time,
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so
they'll
probably
be
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seperated
from what they
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IELTS essay What obstacles do you predict in the relationship between Mickey and Linda?

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