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What makes a safe learning environment

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I think a safe learning environment would be where students would be allowed to express their creativity rather than be closed in a cage and forced to think the way everybody thinks. I think a safe learning environment is where students are allowed to think in their way and learn in their way because every mind is different and it is impossible to make everybody think like one brain and learn like one brain. This is where creativity can thrive. I think concentration will thrive in a quiet learning environment or an undisturbed learning environment, if people are speaking loudly or loud noises people can get distracted easily. Cooperation can be where students cooperate easily without issues like with group activities where everybody should be given a fair chance and say in the activity. Commitment is where students should be committed to their work and putting their best foot forward in any work they might have, and on handing in their work on time and having it properly and thoroughly completed, as this adds on to them getting better marks on their work, and they would learn to be committed every time.
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the way everybody
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allowed
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in their way and learn in their way
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every mind is
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different
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like one brain and learn like one brain. This is where creativity can thrive. I
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think
concentration will thrive in a quiet
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learning
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environment
or an undisturbed
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learning
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environment
, if
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distracted
easily
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students
cooperate
easily
without issues like with group activities where everybody should be
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given
a
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fair
chance and say in the activity. Commitment is where
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students
should
be committed
to their
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work
and putting their best foot forward in any
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work
they might have, and on handing in their
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work
on time and having it
properly
and
thoroughly
completed, as this
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adds
on to them getting better marks on their
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, and they would learn to
be committed
every time.
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IELTS essay What makes a safe learning environment

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
192 words
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