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6. Describe a plan in your life.

6. Describe a plan in your life. Q520y
in my short speech, I am going to outline my aspiration toward life. as I am involved in mankind I have to do something avail upon life which I call it God's instruction. a plan I got to fulfill is putting the foundation of the world's largest animal shelter where animals feel at home. beforehand I materialize my desire I need to consummate my further education in the name of gaining vast of budget otherwise it will cost me an arm and leg. in the center of realizing this idea like everyone I also have to make the group who will track my path. if I will be successful in this then my spirit will rejoin eternal serenity.
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my short speech, I am going to outline my aspiration toward life.
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am involved
in mankind I
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have to
do something avail upon life which I call it God's instruction.
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a
plan I
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got
to fulfill is putting the foundation of the world's largest animal shelter where animals feel at home.
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beforehand
I materialize my desire I need to consummate my
further
education in the name of gaining vast of budget
otherwise
it will cost me an arm and leg.
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in
the center of realizing this
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idea
like everyone I
also
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have to
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make
the group who will
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track
my path.
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if
I will be successful in this then my spirit will rejoin eternal serenity.
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IELTS essay 6. Describe a plan in your life.

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