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6. Describe a singer you like

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in my short speech, I am going to outline the person who I am dying for listening to her. she is one of America's most listened singers Elizabeth Grant as known as Lana del Rey which we call it pseudonym. she owns the genre of alternative rock the combination of rock and classic music and indie pop the mixture of guitar and pop which was got predominant somehow in the year 1990s. I itch to listen to her because of the rhythm, the aesthetic vibe she gives us, and furthermore, she has authority over her songs' lyrics. while I am listening to her I feel butterflies in my stomach and I fell over the moon. moreover, her songs help me to gain better sleep.
in
my short speech, I am going to outline the person who I am dying for listening to her.
she
is one of America's most listened singers Elizabeth Grant as known as
Lana del Rey
which we call it pseudonym.
she
owns
the genre of alternative rock the combination of rock and classic music and indie pop the mixture of guitar and pop which was
got
predominant somehow in the year 1990s. I itch to listen to her
because
of the rhythm, the aesthetic vibe she gives us, and
furthermore
, she has authority over her songs' lyrics.
while
I am listening to her I feel butterflies in my stomach and I fell over the moon.
moreover
, her songs
help
me to gain better sleep.
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IELTS essay 6. Describe a singer you like

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