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describe an art you like, when you first saw it, what you know about it,

describe an art you like, when you first saw it, what you know about it, nEa1E
I do like paintings, but I'm not good at, just I'm interested as an art. When my parents and I visited Paris, I saw Monalisa's portrait. At the beginning I didn't realize beauty of this painting however my father gave me some interesting information about monalisa. Monalisa is half portrait painting which has been created by Leonardo Da Vinci. Leonardo is famous painter furthermore, he is known as a sculpture, an engineer and an architecture. It's believed that Leonardo painted this beauty between 1503 and 1506 furthermore he did nit give portrait to Lisa's family, this I think so interesting. Mona Lisa is most valuable portrait in the world which estimated price is approximately 1 billion Dollars.
I do like paintings,
but
I'm not
good
at,
just
I'm interested as an art. When my parents and I visited Paris, I
saw
Monalisa
's
portrait
. At the beginning I didn't realize beauty of this painting
however
my father gave me
some
interesting information about
monalisa
.
Monalisa
is half
portrait
painting which has
been created
by
Leonardo Da Vinci
. Leonardo is
famous
painter
furthermore
, he
is known
as a sculpture, an engineer and an architecture. It's believed that Leonardo painted this beauty between 1503 and 1506
furthermore
he did nit give
portrait
to Lisa's family, this I
think
so
interesting. Mona Lisa is
most
valuable
portrait
in the world which estimated price is approximately 1 billion Dollars.
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IELTS essay describe an art you like, when you first saw it, what you know about it,

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