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What kinds of movies do you enjoy watching and why do you enjoy watching them Use specific examples to explain your answer

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Each person has his own preferences of movie genres and often visit a movie theater to enjoy premiers or some of his favorites cast on a big screen. I personally like to watch documentary movies at home and romance comedies at a cinema and I will explain why in the following essay. First of all, when I watch documentary movies at home I feel in more private atmosphere and so I can focus on a particular movie. Consequently, I can better understand the story of famous people or other historical event, for instance. In fact, documentary movies are with cognitive purposes and I believe that home is the best place to watch them, due to the quite and tranquil place. I will never forget, when I watched a documentary movie with a big budget at home. It was about Fredy Mercury's life before he had become a superstar. By watching it I tapped into exclusive news and facts about the singer, that people may are not familiar with. If I had watched that movie at a movie theater, I wouldn't have felt good and would probably missed some details. However, I prefer watching genres such as horror, science-fiction and especially romance comedies at a movie theater because these movies elicit emotions and I can share with my pals or my significant other. When we are frightened by seeing a scene from a horror movie or we laugh because of a extremely funny scene with the special effects in a movie theater we can always grab our partner for courage or laugh together. We are more excited and feel confident as well. For example, I went to a cinema to watch a great 3D comedy movie with my girlfriend a year ago. It was her first 3D experience and she was exhilarating by watching a plot with special effects. Moreover, the cast was full with world famous actors and their performance was absolutely unique. The soundtrack of the movie turned into a hit everywhere. If I have the opportunity to watch the same movie anew at a movie theater, I definitely would not hesitate to go. To sum up, there are numerous kinds of movies I like to watch but the most essential genres are documentary and romance comedies. The best place to watch documentary films is home due to the absence of audience that might distract and a person can profoundly concentrate. However, I prefer watching romance comedies at a movie theater with my girlfriend, because the ambience is more realistic and believable.
Each person has his
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preferences of
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genres and
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often
visit a
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movie
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theater
to enjoy premiers or
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some
of his favorites cast on a
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big
screen. I
personally
like to
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watch
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documentary
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movies
at home and romance
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comedies
at a cinema and I will
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explain
why in the following essay.

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First of all
, when I
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watch
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documentary
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movies
at home I feel in more private
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atmosphere and
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so
I can focus on a particular
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movie
.
Consequently
, I can better understand the story of
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famous
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people
or other historical
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event
,
for instance
. In fact,
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documentary
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movies
are with cognitive purposes and I believe that home is the best place to
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watch
them, due to the quite and tranquil place. I will never forget, when I
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watched
a
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documentary
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movie
with a
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big
budget at home. It was about
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Fredy
Mercury's life
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before
he had become a superstar. By watching it I tapped into exclusive news and facts about the singer, that
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people
may are not familiar with. If I had
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watched
that
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movie
at a
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movie
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theater
, I wouldn't have felt
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good
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some
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details
.

However
, I prefer watching genres such as horror, science-fiction and
especially
romance
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comedies
at a
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movie
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theater
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because
these
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movies
elicit emotions and I can share with my pals or my significant other. When we
are frightened
by seeing a scene from a horror
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movie or
we laugh
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because
of
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a
extremely
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funny
scene with the special effects in a
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movie
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theater
we can always grab our partner for courage or laugh together. We are more excited and feel confident
as well
.
For example
, I went to a cinema to
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watch
a great 3D
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comedy
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movie
with my girlfriend a year ago. It was her
first
3D
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experience and
she was exhilarating by watching a plot with special effects.
Moreover
, the cast was
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full with
world
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famous
actors and their performance was
absolutely
unique. The soundtrack of the
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movie
turned into a hit everywhere. If I have the opportunity to
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watch
the same
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movie
anew at a
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movie
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theater
, I definitely would not hesitate to go.

To sum up, there are numerous kinds of
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movies
I like to
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watch
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but
the most essential genres are
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documentary
and romance
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comedies
. The best place to
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watch
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documentary
films is home due to the absence of audience that might distract and a person can
profoundly
concentrate.
However
, I prefer watching romance
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comedies
at a
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movie
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theater
with my girlfriend,
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because
the ambience is more realistic and believable.
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IELTS essay What kinds of movies do you enjoy watching and why do you enjoy watching them Use specific examples to explain your answer

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
423 words
5.5
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