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gives information about how to manufacture pots.

gives information about how to manufacture pots. XqQQq

The process gives information about how to manufacture pots. Overall, it can be clearly seen that there are 11 main stages in the process, beginning with digging, and ending with finishing pots. At the first step, a digger dug raw materials out of the ground and transported them to the factory by truck. This figure for clay is put on a crushing to be smaller pieces before mixing with water to make a mixture which falls into a mould to form the shape. Over a period of 4-6 hours, liquid is dried and formed into assembled clay pots. Afterward, semi-finished products are moved to the oven where they are heated at the temperature of 1000oC to be dried. The next step is dipping into a bucket of color to be colored and firing where the pots are continually converted into the oven again to let the paint dry. The process finishes when pots are delivered to the customer and store.

The process gives information about how to manufacture pots.

Overall
, it can be clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there are 11 main stages in the process, beginning with digging, and ending with finishing pots.

At the first
 step, a digger dug raw materials out of the ground and transported them to the factory by truck. This figure for clay is put
 on a crushing to be smaller pieces This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 mixing with water to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 a mixture which falls into a Possible spelling mistake. 'mould' is British English.mold
mould
 to form the shape. Over a period of 4-6 hours, liquid is dried
 and formed into assembled clay pots.

Afterward, semi-finished products are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the oven where they are heated
 at the temperature of 1000oC to be dried
. The next
 step is dipping into a bucket of color to be colored
 and firing where the pots are continually
 converted into the oven again to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 the paint dry. The process finishes when pots are delivered
 to the customer and store. 