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what is your hurry?

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In today's hectic life it an astonishing fact that people from all walks of life differ greatly in their attitudes towards this phenomenon. In my point of view I prefer to successful in my entire life. So, as Hollywood celebrities say: " Let’s cut to the chase. " Taking the proposed subject into account the reason which may shed some light on my point is that success can gives me some motivation to endure life's problems. It goes without saying being a successful manager or leader will make me more mature and capable because I will learn more from the easy or tough process of my career. In fact, it can promote my work and because of that I can receive many promotions in my life. As a corollary, successful in career had ushered our species one giant step closer peak of redemption. Another rationale of why I have positive idea about success hurry in my life is depending on my characteristic. It is absolutely certain that I am form a country that we learn some valuable intrinsic skills that we should gain more success. As a case in point, I am a man who has a penchant for achieving a highly convenient life with high amount of income and luxury properties, so I would put my concentration on my occupation and acquiring best spot in my company. On the whole, success can brought me more boon than bane. Nevertheless, the two paragraphs in the body should not be over generalized. Just as a old adage goes: " a coin has two sides" , those who take the other side are partially reasonable every once in a while. That is, there might be a situation in which some may have no hurry in their lives. This significantly lies in the fact that, they find life short for having hurry and they replace it with relaxing. To put it in a nutshell, in light of the previously discussed reasons, the view point of those who believe hurry is not necessary is accepted occasionally, though the situations like short life should not be taken as a general rule. Indeed, taking more motivation and my characteristic are prime factors to my propensity to choose more success for my life. If I have a chance to gain more success, I do not have a bit of hesitation to get it.
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people
from all walks of
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life
differ
greatly
in their attitudes towards this phenomenon. In my
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point
of view I prefer to successful in my entire
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life
.
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to the chase.
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Taking the proposed subject into account the reason which may shed
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some
light on my
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point
is that
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success
can
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gives
me
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some
motivation to endure life's problems. It goes without saying being a successful manager or leader will
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make
me more mature and capable
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because
I will learn more from the easy or tough process of my career. In fact, it can promote my work and
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because
of that I can receive
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many
promotions in my
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life
. As a corollary, successful in career had ushered our species one giant step closer peak of redemption.

Another rationale of why I have
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positive
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idea
about
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success
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hurry
in my
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life
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is depending
on my characteristic. It is
absolutely
certain that I am form a country that we learn
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some
valuable intrinsic
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skills
that we should gain more
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success
. As a case in
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point
, I am a
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man
who has a penchant for achieving a
highly
convenient
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life
with high amount of income and luxury properties,
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so
I would put my concentration on my occupation and acquiring best spot in my
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company
.
On the whole
,
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success
can brought me more boon than bane.

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, the two paragraphs in the body should not be over generalized.
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as
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a
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adage goes:
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; a coin has two
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,
those who take the other side are
partially
reasonable every once in a while.
That is
, there might be a situation in which
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may
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no
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in their
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lives
. This
significantly
lies in the fact that, they find
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life
short for having
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hurry and
they replace it with relaxing.

To put it in a nutshell, in light of the previously discussed reasons, the view
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point
of those who believe
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hurry
is not necessary is
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accepted
occasionally
, though the situations like short
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life
should not
be taken
as a general
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rule
.
Indeed
, taking more motivation and my characteristic are prime factors to my propensity to choose more
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success
for my
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life
. If I have a chance to gain more
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success
, I do not have a bit of hesitation to
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get
it.
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IELTS essay what is your hurry?

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
396 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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