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what is your goal in 5 years later?

what is your goal in 5 years later? bEXOB
Acording to my plan, I want to get a good job to become a business success woman after graduating. That’s reason to me try my best. I reseted for my studying process by learning all english skills like: listening, reading, writing, presentation, speaking, etc in this year. Firstly, I have to prepare a big knowledge because the next semester is pretty hard. Beside, I also spend the times to read books, that thing help me to improve myself on career path. In my opinion, to get this my setting goal have to do anything more. Secondly, I’ll continute learning the university while I deffinitely find a part-times job to make a little bit money for my fee in next two years. I expected in fourth and fifth years, I shall find a available job like sale. Not only that but also I’ll choose an accomodation to buy a small house in the future. Besides that, I want to live my father together to convenient care. I shall wellcome to HCM city. That’s a facilities for me.
Acording
to my plan, I want to
get
a
good
job to become a business success woman after graduating. That’s reason to me try my best. I
reseted
for my studying process by learning all
english
skills
like: listening, reading, writing, presentation, speaking, etc in this year.
Firstly
, I
have to
prepare a
big
knowledge
because
the
next
semester is pretty
hard
. Beside, I
also
spend the times to read books, that thing
help
me to
improve
myself on career path. In my opinion, to
get
this my setting goal
have to
do anything more.
Secondly
, I’ll
continute
learning the university while I
deffinitely
find a part-times job to
make
a
little bit
money for my fee in
next
two years. I
expected
in fourth and fifth years, I shall find
a
available job like sale. Not
only
that
but
also
I’ll choose an
accomodation
to
buy
a
small
house
in the future.
Besides
that, I want to
live
my father together to convenient care. I shall
wellcome
to
HCM
city. That’s
a facilities
for me.
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IELTS essay what is your goal in 5 years later?

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
176 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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