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it is not uncommon that children are required to obey the rule of their parents and teachers.Some people are worried that too much control over children will not prepare them well for their adult life.

it is not uncommon that children are required to obey the rule of their parents and teachers. Some people are worried that too much control over children will not prepare them well for their adult life. Pr1nw

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